A poem

<Daleader> · 21-02-06, 02:13

Zendegi chest? Khone del khordan
Zeri devar arezo mordan.

Adamhi saber kone,
Shab ra sahar koned,
Qam donya ro az sar bedar koned.

Hali ke shodam z yadat farimosh, to ra mebenam mesli yek mihe khamosh.

TO KE RAFTE BRO, VALI GALBAMAN RO BEZAR RO BRO,
Dege yadam nakon to fagad bargard-o-bro.

Dega kardem to ra ze yadeam farimosh,
Shole ishqam shod baz yek khakestare, khamosh.

Zendegi chest? Kone del khordan
Zeri devar arezo mordan.
Zer aberhi asemon abre, az ishaq sorodan.

Ay goal Bahar, to baz karde Baharam khazon, hali bro
Baz man ro ishofte karde bro, vali inro bedon bedone to nemekhandam, bekhater ke man fagad garibam garibam to in donya ke to be man drost kardi.

Mohamamd A.
21,Feb.2005

yasyas · 21-02-06, 02:48

:em6:mer30

<Daleader> · 21-02-06, 21:31

Not as good as your one but still trying.

negaar · 21-02-06, 21:49

merc it was nice

negaar · 21-02-06, 21:51

TO KE RAFTI BORO, VALI GALBAM RO BEZAR RO BORO,

WOW

<Daleader> · 22-02-06, 04:42

U too kind. Thank you very much for ur positive feedbacks. If I make any mistake forgive me since i haven't been in iran for a long time and the poem i write here are prepared the moment i open the thread. I unfortantly prepare them before hand since for me poem come deeping on the mode I am in.

Love
Mohammad A

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<Daleader> Forum God Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 2,632 Credits: 1,198 Thanks: 29 Thanked 53 Times in 32 Posts	A poem Zendegi chest? Khone del khordan Zeri devar arezo mordan. Adamhi saber kone, Shab ra sahar koned, Qam donya ro az sar bedar koned. Hali ke shodam z yadat farimosh, to ra mebenam mesli yek mihe khamosh. TO KE RAFTE BRO, VALI GALBAMAN RO BEZAR RO BRO, Dege yadam nakon to fagad bargard-o-bro. Dega kardem to ra ze yadeam farimosh, Shole ishqam shod baz yek khakestare, khamosh. Zendegi chest? Kone del khordan Zeri devar arezo mordan. Zer aberhi asemon abre, az ishaq sorodan. Ay goal Bahar, to baz karde Baharam khazon, hali bro Baz man ro ishofte karde bro, vali inro bedon bedone to nemekhandam, bekhater ke man fagad garibam garibam to in donya ke to be man drost kardi. Mohamamd A. 21,Feb.2005 __________________ "Yesterday is history, 2maro is a mystery! Today is a gift that is why they call it present!" Kungfu PANDA!

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<Daleader> Forum God Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 2,632 Credits: 1,198 Thanks: 29 Thanked 53 Times in 32 Posts	Thank you Not as good as your one but still trying. __________________ "Yesterday is history, 2maro is a mystery! Today is a gift that is why they call it present!" Kungfu PANDA!

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22-02-06, 04:42	#6 (permalink)
<Daleader> Forum God Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 2,632 Credits: 1,198 Thanks: 29 Thanked 53 Times in 32 Posts	U too kind U too kind. Thank you very much for ur positive feedbacks. If I make any mistake forgive me since i haven't been in iran for a long time and the poem i write here are prepared the moment i open the thread. I unfortantly prepare them before hand since for me poem come deeping on the mode I am in. Love Mohammad A __________________ "Yesterday is history, 2maro is a mystery! Today is a gift that is why they call it present!" Kungfu PANDA!

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